“Just a little further honey…”
Her wet hair was plastered down on her forehead as if she had just had a shower.
“I can’t do this much longer”
“Baby, don’t give up now. We’re almost there. Push just a little more.”
He could see the exhaustion on her face. Beads of sweat glistened in the harsh tube light as they streaked down her neck.
A baby’s wail filled the room.
“It’s your turn this time” She said collapsing on the bed they had finally put in place.
Moving house with a baby in tow was harder than she had imagined.
Another superb misdirection
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you should start writing suspense plots for bollywood. 🙂
haha! not a bad idea.. 🙂
Another great twist
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